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Friday, June 11, 2021
A Dangerous pet
A Dangerous Pet
The King had known that the gift he presented to his children on their 5th birthday was dangerous. He was prepared to take the risk of letting them own a pet dragon, however. One day, the twins would rule the kingdom together, and they would need all the help they could get. No-one could deny that a dragon was a powerful ally! Before that day, though, the children had much work to do. They had to train their dragon!
If they wanted to rule the kingdom. As the twins were trying to train the dragon one of the twins Jace suggested if they were going to rule the kingdom with there dragon they must name their pet so as the twins thought they decided to call him or her ally after a while they could hear the mighty bell ringing the bell usually means there being an attack. As the twins hid from all the chaos their dragon didn’t do so good he tried to hide behind a skinny pole after a while they couldn’t hear anything they told ally to stay and the twins went back to see if their dad was ok. There dad was fine but there sister wasn’t they attackers kidnap her the twins didn’t seem to care As dad cried the twins walk back to there dragon to see if he was ok when they arrived Ally was gone I mean it was obvious there was a big whole in the roof they ran out and seen Ally flying around the jungle as the twins tried to chase ally Jace said that they should give because Ally was in the air anymore. They return sad and when they went back to there warehouse they seen Ally there they got mad and all Ally had to do and listen to there yelling the twins turn 6 tomorrow and they plan to take over the kingdom when there 7 as the bratty twins yelled they seen Ally eyes change from blue to purple Ally felled sorry but the twins got scared then here eyes change to blue then she was happy the boys thought about the eyes meaning her feeling after a while they noticed her eyes can change to 5 colours blue Happy-purple sorry-Orange stronge-green-adventure- red-angry
As they noticed there dragon wasn’t evil cause his eyes barely turned red witch mean he was good the twins got even madder cause they wanted a evil dragon but jace, Jace didn’t care cause he wanted to be a good guy as jace flig his long blond hair beside him he seen his brother hitting Ally Jace ran up to them and got between them and his brother hit him putting him in the hospital all Jace brother had to do is feel sorry for jace and Ally after a while Jace got but in the hospital Jace brother Mich was there waiting for him to feel better but the doctors said he won't be better ever seen Mich cried out loud when he told his dad the dad grounded him and he had to stay in his room he looked out the window and seen Ally flying out the warehouse and Mich had to do something and jump out his window and made his way to the ground he followed Mich into the jungle he seen Ally landing on a wall mich ran up to it he seen Ally just there standing then he did a big roar mich jump back as like a scared he seen that Ally was sad because of her eyes were purple mich walk up to Ally, Ally seen him and moved back Mich said he was sorry for everything and thought if he could still be his friend ALly eyes change to blue with a slight node Mich was happy he jump on Ally and flew back to the kingdom he took Ally to the grand opening of papa jack barbarian shop everyone was so happy for papa jack. Mich wanted to go show Jace Ally but his dad did a rule that Jace cant see Ally until he better but Mich didn’t like that as Jace in his bed looked out the window he seen Ally and Jace flying toward they stop and said hi Mich said that when he gets better they would take other the kingdom Ally eyes turn grey a wired colour his head turn right and the twins thought of he as a What did he say but anyways Jace wasn’t all in the plan because he wanted to be a god kid become like his dad a Barbarian king and be nice to his kingdom but Mich complained of it being our dream Jace raised his voice saying THAT WAS YOUR DREAM NOT MINE YOU JUST WANT TO TAKE RULE OF EVERYTHING
The doctors heard and jace told mich to go as the doctors enter the room Mich and Ally were gone Jace felt sorry and as Ally flew Mich was crying he got on the ground and used his anger on a tree Ally seen him and his eyes green he picked up Mich and flew away Mich yelled wear we going Ally kept flying and mich was begging him to stop after a while Ally stop Mich was dizzy and went to sit down Mich ask him where he took us and Ally replied with sign language mich didn’t know sign Language and didn’t understand Ally he wish Jace was there cause he learnt Sign language in school it was almost night time and Mich forgot about him and Jace Birthday he told Ally to take him home Mich jump on Ally back and flew back to the kingdom he told Ally to stay at the Warehouse and go to sleep Mich quickly ran home and ran to his room he took a deep breath and went to sleep he had a dream about taking over the world after a while he woke up and the first think he did is ran out the door to the factory it was wired because his parents weren't home when he made it to the factory he seen his family there even jace they said that they found out about him trying to take over the kingdom but his dad said it ok cause you can just be the king when you turn 50 like me Mich agree but he wanted to rule the whole kingdom so he pretend they both went down to celebrate their birth mich knew that Jace was sad because of he was in a wheelchair Mich had an idea to make him happy but he would have to wait until tomorrow
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WOW Tama.
ReplyDeleteYou have certainly written H E A P S.
Maybe next time you might want to re-read your work and add in some punctuation.It will make your work look neater and easier to read.
If you could have a pet dragon what would you call it and what would it look like?.
Mine would be friendly like the dragon that Pete has.