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Tuesday, September 28, 2021

Disco house

 

Disco House Kazy was heading home from her dancing lessons on her bike until she seen this glass house it was colourful and people inside were dancing after looking at it for a while she continued biking home Kazy love to dance and her favourite music was hip hop she made it home to her apartment and her little brother was more to see her she seen his dad who was late to work because Kazy was supposed to look after her little brother 10 minutes ago after her dad left to work she out her little brother to sleep the next day she took her brother to school He called her the best sister ever and Kazy said he was the best little brother in the world she said to her brother to have a good day at school after her brother ran off she went to her dancing class the girls there pick on her saying all mean things but Kazy was strong and ignore them until they said You need to be beautiful to dance Kazy leash out calling her swear words Kazy left and went to this building roof to cool down she was sitting down but then she could hear her favorite song she peak behind the door and seen this boy dancing she could see his feet and was surprised he was a dancer but the moves were original she was scare she waited and got the courage to talk to the boy Do you like hip hop Kazy said to the boy he said yeah hip hop my favourite and this song my favorite you into dancing Yeah i do dance lessons said Kazy, Kazy also ask if he could teach her The boy didn’t want to so he left the building Kazy went to pick her brother up from school Kazy and her brother return home and seen her dad lying on the ground Kazy was scared and call the hospital Kazy cried and her brother was scare the hospital van pick up her dad and it took a while for Kazy brother to find out and kazy brother cried the next day Kazy was the caretaker of the house she drop her brother of to school and head back to the building to see the boy she went back there and ask him again the boy said he wanted nothing of it again saying that he quick dancing Kazy says her dad in the hospital the boy stops but carry on walking Kazy picks up her brother and take him home After Kazy and her brother lay down and watch a movie Kazy brother ask when dad coming home and Kazy reply soon The next day Kazy late to take her brother to school she gets him ready and leaves the house on the way to Kazy brother school she thinks about dancing again they get to school and drops her brother off she says bye Kazy turns around to see that boy she seen dancing on the building he said he would teach her how to dance Kazy said why she thought he didn’t like to dance the boy says his name is Zee and he dose dancing lessons Kazy wants to know why he lied Zee said because he was scared Zee took her to the place they practice and in couple of years she would be performing in that disco house TO BE CONTINUED

1 comment:

  1. There's a lot of writing here Tama.You've got some great ideas.
    I like that you kept us in suspense.I look forward to part two.
    One thing I did notice is there is no punctuation.Can you re-read your work and add some.It will make it easier to read and also look neater.

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