I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, December 9, 2020
The frozen palace
Once, this place had been filled with colour and sunshine. Once, this place had seen thousands of people come and go. Once, this had been the happiest of places, filled with laughter and joy.
Now, everything was cold. Everyone was gone. Well, almost everyone
There used to be photos everywhere we were even a wonder of the world but now christmas spirit has gone down to 13% the world is changing and 2020 has been a weird year and on december the 25 where the globe gets presents
Not this year because the north pole has got a Blizzard and is locked down because of the snow can’t build they can’t move there stuck in Santa workshop.
That gives someone the perfect time to ruin Christmas. They cringe at the person who is the main enemy of Santa. He is going to steal the present and take them to his fire and take care of the christmas star.
Sandman the god of dreams ask jack frost with sy langwitch on why he hit the north pole with a Blizzard he said “he has fallen into a cursed from the bogeyman and he is trying to get read of
Santa, christmas all the jolly times of the world will be fear of me I want to be biliven Tooth fairy call Bunny we need to try get North out before anything gets even worse
Meanwhile with the cringe singing
“1 present gone 2 presents done you get 1billion more and throw it in the fire. “CRINGE CRINGE, what wait who said that CRINGE “who there “it's the boogeyman
Oo hey man you made it so are we doing it getting read of christmas … ok silence let's go steal the star. “Bunny u see anything yeah the cringe he’s heading to the pole there going to steal the star
O no we need North out of there. How the blizzard is frozen with snow we need to stop them What do we do “we wait at the star
They will come closer and closer to us and then we get them
I wonder what's happening in the wok shop
5 DAYS TILL CHRISTMAS
Santa we need to get out of here “how were stuck and the windows are cracking “Santa aren’t you the Greatest Maker in the world
Yes but. Wait that can work I can just make a device to break the snow it will take 5 days
But sir sir there only 5 days left of christmas “Hmm I might know the way
The window gonna blow I can’t hold any longer “Santa we need to get out of here Bunny Bunny BUNNY “what jack, when do you thing there coming IDK
But just stay there and they will come how do u know cause there another tree there with a star on it
What ohhh. Wait I see them there coming, Wait crouch down I got you you little naughty list got you Jingle what are you doing I was cold and put on this long cote and I was coming because the star stolen and now kids are gonna be mad
4 DAYS TILL CHRISTMAS
Radio. Hi santa merry christmas this year I would want a puppy I want to surprise my grandma merry christmas
Next christmas wish
Santa we need your help boogeymans and cringe they stole the star anyways can I get a wish I wasn't a easter egg
3 DAYS TILL CHRISTMAS
Tooth Sandy you two go after them me an jack will try to get them out and jingle you you just stand there
Santa were coming Were in the workshop Santa what are u doing my powers only 5% of the world believes come on get up I can’t
We need to get the star back soon sandman was seen fighting Boogeyman the star drop get it
Nooo Sandman noo Fear the man little man Jack we need to get to the tree
The star was returned It was sad the guardians had a funeral and soon later he will return
THE END
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Kia ora Tama.
ReplyDeleteYou have some great ideas in your story.
You've used some interesting words and I was enjoying your story but because there isn't much punctuation it's a bit hard to follow the story line.
I think you need to re-read your work.Even if it means you end up writing less,you write it with all the right punctuation.
Using full stops and capital letters in the right place will help make your work look neater too.
Have a wonderful holiday and Christmas.
Kia ora Tama.
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Have a wonderful holiday....
Kia ora Tama.
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Have a great week.
Kia ora Tama.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
I wish you all the best for the new term to school.