I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora! My name is Maddison I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
I thought that this was an interesting and creative blog post. I also noticed that lots of other students from your class did the same thing. I think that you could explain a bit more on why that is.This blog is extremely eye catching.
I think that there is a bit to improve despite the creative work you have done. I Think that you could explain a bit on what this is and why you made it because I am a bit confused. Another thing people from all around the world can view your blog so they might not know how to read Te Reo.
Hi Tama. I'm Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I really like you picture that you put of your blog. It looks really cool. What did you make it on. Next time I think you should put the translation of what you have written into english because lots of people can't read maori. Apart from that I think it looks really cool.
Hey Tama. My name is Chloe I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. This blog post is great! I really like the picture of you and the whale. I was just curious did you draw this or did you get the picture off google? If you did get it off google maybe you should try and draw it yourself, its super fun if you do it yourself.
I really like how it's eye catching and creative. Maybe next time you could write more of a description, like explain it a bit more? It would be amazing if you could translate it so then people including me would know what it says? Well done
Kia Ora, my name is Parwin and I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really liked your drawing that you made and how you inserted that photo of I'm guessing you on a whale, very creative.
This reminds me of when I was in year 5 and we were doing art. I remember seeing a picture of this peice of art and it looks really cool! I always wanted to make something like that!
I think that to improve, you could write a bit more and maybe in english if you can!
Naia ahau ko Paikea e mihi atu ki a koutou.
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
I thought that this was an interesting and creative blog post. I also noticed that lots of other students from your class did the same thing. I think that you could explain a bit more on why that is.This blog is extremely eye catching.
I think that there is a bit to improve despite the creative work you have done. I Think that you could explain a bit on what this is and why you made it because I am a bit confused. Another thing people from all around the world can view your blog so they might not know how to read Te Reo.
Kind regards,
- Maddie
Hi Tama. I'm Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I really like you picture that you put of your blog. It looks really cool. What did you make it on. Next time I think you should put the translation of what you have written into english because lots of people can't read maori. Apart from that I think it looks really cool.
ReplyDeleteHey Tama.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chloe I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
This blog post is great! I really like the picture of you and the whale. I was just curious did you draw this or did you get the picture off google? If you did get it off google maybe you should try and draw it yourself, its super fun if you do it yourself.
I really like how it's eye catching and creative. Maybe next time you could write more of a description, like explain it a bit more? It would be amazing if you could translate it so then people including me would know what it says?
Well done
Kind regards
- Chloe
Kia Ora, my name is Parwin and I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your drawing that you made and how you inserted that photo of I'm guessing you on a whale, very creative.
This reminds me of when I was in year 5 and we were doing art. I remember seeing a picture of this peice of art and it looks really cool! I always wanted to make something like that!
I think that to improve, you could write a bit more and maybe in english if you can!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin